Hi,
The color and bitterness are a bit low if you are looking for a Pale Ale, but more in line with a Blonde Ale (which is what you might be shooting for in any case). Personally I would up the bitterness a bit to balance the high OG you are starting with. Alternately you can use a bit less pale malt and lower the OG.
Most American Ales are made with 2 row barley, the 6 row is pretty rare. Also I would use a pound of Crystal malt instead of the Vienna. Vienna is really used more in German and other continental styles.
Other than that it looks pretty good.
Cheers!
Brad